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11.15.02

Something In The Way

i know that when you close your eyes
It's still my face you see
i know when you sleep at night
You still dream of me
i know that when no one's around
You still hear my voice
And when they play my favorite song
You think about your choice
i know that when you're with her
All your doubts fade away
Tucked deep inside with all your lies
Saved for another day
But you still read my letters
Because they make you smile
And i know you sometimes wonder
If it was worthwhile
Because every time the phone rings
You hope i'm on the other end
But you know as well as i do
i can only be your friend
i know that when you see me pass
Your heart still skips a beat
And i know it makes you happy
To be driving by my street
i know that you look at the stars
Wondering if i am too
And i know my picture's on your wall-
That one i drew for you
i know you wish that we could talk
The way we did before
And that every day that passes
Makes you miss me even more
i know i'm still the last thing
On your mind before you sleep
And that's the deepest darkest secret
That you'll ever have to keep
i know you wear that shirt i like
Cuz it reminds you of me
i know sometimes you get sad
Thinking of what we'll never be
i know that she will break your heart
And then you'll have no one
You'll come to me
All i can say is
What's done is done.
i know as you lie awake-
You still think of me
You still stare into the mirror
Trying to see what i see
i know that when you're all alone
(You still hear my voice)
And i know there's nothing i can do...
i know this was your choice.
©2004-2009 ~mightymadness
:iconmightymadness:

Author's Comments

i wrote this aaaaaaaages ago...

But i have to confess- i've been missing someone. *nods sadly*

You probably think you know who you are... when you're not it. It's someone who probably doesn't expect to be on my mind a whole bunch... *shrugs* Maybe i'll tell you who you are some day. Heh...

It's old and rhymy and corny... but it was written YEARS ago... i'm only submitting it to express the way i feel right now.

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:iconlearntoswim:
Theres nothing wrong with this. I like it. You did a good job.

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"Though lovers be lost, love shall not,
And death shall have no dominion."
:iconcoolositymax:
a shockingly rare +fav.

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:iconbadblokebob:
I can guess who it is! I CAN GUESS!!!

Doesn't mean I'm right. But I can still guess, and think I'm right :p

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:iconbadblokebob:
Cos of Coolo's very very rare faving of this, I decided to read it all. One-stanza poems this long ususally put me off. Stanzas are your friend! Use them! lol :p

It was really good, actually. Great use of rhyme, I thought. I don't like the brackets at the end. They seem completely pointless and out of place, if I'm honest. But those aside, I really like it... enough to fav it too, in fact. Shocking, I know, but there you have it.

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gallery|journal|girlfriend|Bob
:icondemonicangelsuicide:
Are you missing rich?... or maybe me? eh- thought i'd ask... :D

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:skullbones:i carved a :heart: onto my wrist:skullbones:

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